I didn’t listen to much of the State of the Union the other
night. I can’t do that fairly, because the president’s voice sounds derisive
and condescending, and I don’t hear what he says clearly enough because of the
nonverbal negatives. I did hear parts, and anger bubbled up, so I turned to a
book. And then I read the transcript later.
at 2015 SOTU, image found here |
When you have the transcript, there are all kinds of details
you can draw out, separate from meaning. People have pointed out for some time
that Obama talks about himself pretty endlessly. Andrew Klavan suggested a
drinking game while listening:
1.) Take a drink every
time Obama uses the 1st person, singular pronoun.
2.) Drown.
2.) Drown.
Fortunately, I don’t drink. So, no damage done.
Anyway, I began to wonder, just how often does he refer to
himself? How does that compare to earlier in his presidency (since people have
brought it up enough that his speechwriters should be addressing it as a
problem)? How does that compare to other presidential SOTU speeches?
So I’ve done some analysis, using the handy “find” feature
of my word processor:
Obama SOTU 2015
Total words: 6550 (59 minutes at 110
wpm, without pauses for applause)
Total first-person singular pronouns:
98
Ratio: 1/67 words
For comparison, I looked at three years ago.
Obama SOTU 2012
Total words: 6963 (63 minutes)
Total first-person singular pronouns:
103
Ratio 1/68 words
So he upped the frequency a tad over three years ago, but
probably not a statistically significant change. If he has speechwriters
working on the problem, they’re not up to the job.
How does he compare to his predecessor? I randomly looked up
2003, which was a year before an election year as well.
Bush SOTU 2003
Total words: 5327 (48 minutes)
Total first-person singular pronouns: 43
Ratio: 1/124 words
Clearly Bush was less about himself—by about half. What
about other presidents? Here’s Clinton, in the same year of his presidency as
Obama is this year.
Clinton SOTU 1999
Total words: 7589 (69 minutes)
Total first-person singular pronouns:
116
Ratio: 1/65 words
Interesting. He spoke longer, and used first-person singular
pronouns even more often than Obama. Yet we didn’t talk about it that much at
the time.
How did Reagan do? I chose the 1987 SOTU, which is, again,
the same length into the presidency as this year’s.
Reagan SOTU 1987
Total words: 3799 (35 minutes)
Total first-person singular pronouns:
60
Ratio: 1/63
So Reagan’s a lot less verbose, but he uses first-person
pronouns just as much as Clinton, and slightly more often than Obama. Yet no
one ever commented on it.
There must be something else that’s getting our attention
than simply the use of the first-person pronoun. I started to see a difference
as I skimmed through Bush’s sample address. Here are some of Bush’s uses:
·
“You and I serve our country…”
·
“Some might call this a good record. I call it a
good start. Tonight I ask the House and the Senate to join me…”
·
“I am proposing that all the income tax
reductions set for 2004 and 2006 be made permanent and effective this year.”
·
“I ask you to end the unfair double taxation of dividends.”
·
“I will send you a budget that increases
discretionary spending by 4 percent next year, about as much as the average
family's income is expected to grow.”
·
“… about strengthening Medicare. I urge the
members of this new Congress to act this year.”
·
“I have sent you…”
·
“I urge you to pass…”
·
“I ask you…”
·
“Tonight I ask Congress and the American people
to focus the spirit of service and the resources of government on the needs of
some of our most vulnerable citizens…”
·
“I propose…”
·
“I ask you to protect infants at the very hour
of their birth and end the practice of partial-birth abortion.”
·
“There's never a day when I do not learn of
another threat, or receive reports of operations in progress or give an order
in this global war against a scattered network of killers. The war goes on, and
we are winning.”
·
“I thank the Congress…”
·
“The budget I send you will propose almost $6
billion to quickly make available effective vaccines and treatments against
agents like anthrax, botulinum toxin, ebola and plague. We must assume that our
enemies would use these diseases as weapons, and we must act before the dangers
are upon us.”
·
“Tonight, I am instructing the leaders…”
·
“I will defend the freedom and security of the
American people.”
·
“I have a message for the brave and oppressed
people of Iraq: Your enemy is not surrounding your country, your enemy is
ruling your country.”
·
“Tonight I have a message for the men and women
who will keep the peace, members of the American armed forces.”
That is essentially the entire list. There is not a single
moment where he takes credit or where he orders Congress or anyone else to take
his orders. He thanks; he asks; he proposes; he urges. This was the man the
media said didn’t know how to speak.
There are too many self-references in this year’s SOTU to
handle them all, but we can sample.
·
“In two weeks, I will send this Congress a
budget filled with ideas…”
·
“So tonight, I want to focus less on a checklist
of proposals…”
·
“You [two representative hard workers who suffered
in the bad economy] are the reason I ran for this office. You're the people I
was thinking of six years ago today, in the darkest months of the crisis, when
I stood on the steps of this Capitol and promised we would rebuild our economy
on a new foundation.”
·
“And to everyone in this Congress who still
refuses to raise the minimum wage, I say this…”
·
“That's why I am sending this Congress a bold
new plan to lower the cost of community college—to zero.”
·
“I want to spread that idea all across America…”
·
“And I want to work with this Congress, to make
sure…”
·
“I want the country that eliminated polio and
mapped the human genome to lead a new era of medicine…”
·
“I intend to protect a free and open internet,
extend its reach to every classroom, and every community, and help folks build
the fastest networks…”
·
“I want Americans to…”
·
“…when it comes to issues like infrastructure
and basic research, I know there's bipartisan support in this chamber…”
·
“I believe it's where the American people want
to go.”
·
“I believe in a smarter kind of American
leadership.”
·
“…we reserve the right to act unilaterally, as
we've done relentlessly since I took office to take out terrorists who pose a
direct threat to us and our allies.”
·
“I call on this Congress to show the world that
we are united in this mission by passing a resolution to authorize the use of
force against ISIL.”
·
“…I keep all options on the table to prevent a
nuclear Iran.”
·
“…I will veto any new sanctions bill…”
·
“I urge this Congress to finally pass the
legislation we need to better meet the evolving threat of cyber-attacks, combat
identity theft, and protect our children's information.”
·
“I couldn't be prouder of [our troops, our
scientists, our doctors, our nurses and healthcare workers who fought Ebola in
West Africa], and I thank this Congress for your bipartisan support of their
efforts.”
·
“…I know a lot of really good scientists at
NASA, and NOAA, and at our major universities. The best scientists in the world
are all telling us that our activities are changing the climate.”
·
“I will not let this Congress endanger the
health of our children…”
·
“I will not relent in my determination to shut [GTMO]
down.”
·
“You know, just over a decade ago [at the 2004
Democratic National Convention], I gave a speech in Boston where I said there
wasn't a liberal America, or a conservative America; a black America or a white
America—but a United States of America. I said this because I had seen it in my
own life, in a nation that gave someone like me a chance; because I grew up in
Hawaii, a melting pot of races and customs; because I made Illinois my home…”
·
“I know…. I still think…. I believe…. I have
seen…”
·
“I know…. I know…. I know….”
·
“I have no more campaigns to run. I know,
because I won them both.”
·
“I swore an oath on the steps of this Capitol—to
do what I believe is best for America.”
·
“I hope you'll at least work with me…”
·
“I want…. I want…. I want…. I want…. I want….”
I tried to give a good representative sample, without skewing
to make him look bad. You need to see the final paragraphs in context to
understand all those “I want”s. I think this was an attempt at parallel
construction. An example would be, from My
Fair Lady, when Eliza’s dustman father says, “I’m willing to tell you. I’m
wanting to tell you. I’m waiting to tell you.” The same construction emphasizes
the word(s) you change, adding power and meaningfulness. Lincoln was very good
at this. But, in my opinion, a series of “I want”s sounds very much like a
spoiled 5-year-old to a weak parent the child knows will give in.
Some of Obama’s uses of the first-person pronoun were
acceptable. Most would have come from a less self-absorbed person worded
differently.
A SOTU address is a report, to the legislative branch, on
how well the laws are being executed, and how effective the enacted laws have
been at presumably protecting life, liberty, and property. They are not
intended as a propaganda platform to go directly to the American people to say,
“I’m trying to give you this, and this, and this, but these obstructionist legislators are getting in the way, so I’d like you to help pressure them.”
I did a quick review of the Clinton and Reagan speeches,
because they both used about the same rate of first-person pronouns. Clinton’s
were mostly appropriate to expectation. Many were “I propose....” Some were “I
ask….” A few were to reference stories showing he related to the people. I didn’t
like Clinton; all those proposals were mostly beyond the proper role of government.
But he seemed to respect the process, and the American people.
Reagan’s were particularly endearing. Here are just a few:
·
“I congratulate…”
·
“I stand on the shoulders of giants…”
·
“I invoke special executive powers to declare
that each of you [members of Congress] must never be titled less than honorable
with a capital ‘H.’ Incidentally, I'm delighted you are celebrating the 100th
birthday of the Congress. It's always a pleasure to congratulate someone with
more birthdays than I've had.”
·
“I cannot find better words…”
·
“I renew that pledge…”
·
“I assume full responsibility.”
·
“I am pleased to report…”
·
“I begin with a gentle reminder…”
·
“The responsibility of freedom presses us
towards higher knowledge and, I believe, moral and spiritual greatness. Through
lower taxes and smaller government, government has its ways of freeing people's
spirits. But only we, each of us, can let the spirit soar against our own
individual standards. Excellence is what makes freedom ring. And isn't that
what we do best?”
I miss that voice.
What does this look at linguistics tell us? It’s the
sub-text of the speech. Even with the help of speechwriters, apparently it’s
hard to cover up the thinking.
I don’t recommend simply getting wordsmiths who will alter
the words to hide who the speaker really is. I recommend change. Transformation.
From power-monger to service leader. Failing that, change to a much better
leader in a couple of years.
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